Where information appears matters - Paper 4

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Original opening, 'The missing label': Throughout the morning I had praised our exhibition's careful labels. Just before the doors opened, I noticed that one drawing had no artist's name. Footsteps echoed in the stairwell. I reached for my own spare label, then put it down. I called the organiser over and pointed to the blank space. The footsteps came nearer. Notice how much story time is covered by each part. A short sentence can isolate a moment and slow attention; it does not always make a scene feel faster.