Revise ideas before polishing errors - Paper 1

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Draft: 'The labels are clear. Therefore they are clear.' Purpose: evaluate a label redesign. Facts allowed in this invented example: the letters were enlarged and contrast increased; a reader trial is still needed. Revision improves meaning, structure or emphasis; proofreading checks spelling, punctuation and agreement. Clearly frame the supplied facts as an exercise, not a real school report.