Plan for a reader, then revise - Online practice 4

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Writing brief: write a guide for a class helper about organising art materials. Suggested paragraph headings: Gather approved materials; Sort by type; Label the storage. Clear model: 'Put the coloured pencils in the pencil tray and label the tray clearly.' Unclear draft: 'Tidy the stuff.' Your reader cannot see you pointing. Supply useful detail without inventing real school rules; this is a model writing task.