Build a change, not a list of events - Online practice 1

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Original story brief: a character wants to return a cracked borrowed model unseen; obstacle: the owner asks to see it. Possible decision: admit the damage; consequence: agree a repair. Possible early detail: a crack catches the light. Develop one connected conflict rather than adding unrelated spectacle. Planning lines below are not the full story: use the working pad or separate paper for a one-page draft.